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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/17/2007 3:06:32 PM
Hi there, great atmosphere! Well seen indeed.
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| Photo By: Milena G
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:38:37 AM
Hi there, Well done indeed. That's really what USE FILM should be all about! The only critique I can think of is that you could have taken the picture in less harsh light conditions so that you wouldn't have the light area on the grass. But fine none the less.
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| Photo By: Dimitris Metaxas
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:35:22 AM
Hi there, well... too artificial to call it a photograph to me. But I suppose that's why others call me conservative in these matters ;-)
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| Photo By: Jill Bartlett
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:32:32 AM
Nice subject and lighting... And you didn't add anything with PSP or used HDR techniques???
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| Photo By: Nuno Milheiro
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:30:34 AM
Hi there, just one question: was this point of view better than exactly in the middle of the qay (with the lanterns exactly in line)?
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| Photo By: Larry Fosse
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:28:16 AM
Hi there, nice subject and composition. Too bad you had to do an extreme makeover of it with PSP or something alike... I'd say: if your subject and framing is that good, don't go messing it up like it's been shot on Pluto...
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| Photo By: Danny Brannigan
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:25:05 AM
A classic shot well done.
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| Photo By: Roshan Kumara
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:23:58 AM
Hi there, Very well seen indeed, good lighting and those nice colours too... Great! The title could easily have been 317 btw. ;-)
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| Photo By: jahangir Moazen zade
(K:75)
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:22:05 AM
Hi there, sort of mathematic picture. I think I like it indeed.
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| Photo By: mehrdad tadjdini
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:19:07 AM
Yep, that's another flower. Flowers are difficult to picture. I think to get some more out of the subject, that's been covered by lots and lots of others, you might try another point of view instead of straight into it's face, having an aperture that softens the background (i.e. 2.8 or something alike) making it a very pink subject in a faded green background. Maybe one can easily say anything is good, as long as it's not 'shot from the hip'.
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| Photo By: Serafettin Akbalik
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/13/2007 11:12:58 AM
Hi there, nice scenery... one thing though, have you considered waiting or taking a point of view more to the left so as to get the boat more into the open horizon of the water?
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| Photo By: prabal banerjee
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/10/2007 12:04:28 PM
Yeah! I hope you deliberately did set the ISO to a high value (like 1600 or maybe even 3200 if that's possible with your camera) and did set it to black and white before actually taking the picture, instead of making an extreme makeover of it in PSP on your desktop afterwards.
On the composition I think I would have liked to have that serpent like line out of the middle, in order to make it more dynamic.
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| Photo By: prabal banerjee
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/10/2007 11:34:15 AM
Hi there, I would have tried a more dynamic framing. Something like this:
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| Photo By: Giulia Molon
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/10/2007 11:29:04 AM
Hi there, well seen indeed. The only remark I could make is to ask whether you have tried to make the horizontal lines from grid (from the windows) fit with the horizontal lines from the facade in the reflection?
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| Photo By: Edin Dzeko
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/10/2007 11:17:36 AM
I'd say film still is way ahead of those PSP-ed digital pictures. ;-)
It's just sad the whole world seems to forget such facts that quickly once a hype is born.
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| Photo By: Rutger van Soelen
(K:1337)
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
7/10/2007 11:16:19 AM
I'd say film still is way ahead of those PSP-ed digital pictures. ;-)
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| Photo By: Rutger van Soelen
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
3/9/2007 4:17:44 PM
Hi Vesna, yeah, great opportunity. The models feet are missing which gives her a sort of unfinished look. Same location and effect but just a close up of her head might even be a stronger picture?
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| Photo By: Vesna Radakovic
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
3/9/2007 4:13:28 PM
Hi Debra, well seen. Maybe another cropping would make it even more moodier?
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| Photo By: Debra Garside
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
3/7/2007 3:46:08 PM
Hi Cem, nice image though I'm afraid PSP did a have a lot to do with it (especially the sky). But great none the less.
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| Photo By: Cem Güner
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
3/7/2007 3:43:11 PM
Hi Donna, yeah it's a sad subject with lots of room for contemplation. Did you consider to take the picture in darker weather/sky? Or maybe even with rain? As to enhance it's mood...
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| Photo By: DONNA SIERK
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
2/11/2007 1:43:18 PM
Hi Jhon, Subject is well seen. I would suggest though another cropping, because that guy in the background doesn't have to do anything with the subject nor the story the picture wants to tell, does he?
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| Photo By: Jhon Koopman
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
2/9/2007 8:29:41 PM
Hi Mohammed, Very nice lighting and colors. There is just one thing that bothers me in the subject: would you write in a full color printed book?
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| Photo By: Mohammed Al-kubaisi
(K:55)
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
2/9/2007 8:27:30 PM
Hi Brian, yep must have been cold ;-). Have you considered using a fill in flash? Since there was a lot of light and white parts, the darker ones will definitely lose contrast(especially considering the limited contrast range digital camera's have).
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| Photo By: Brian Botelho
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
2/9/2007 8:17:48 PM
Superb. Nothing more to it.
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| Photo By: Ivo Leupi
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
2/9/2007 8:15:17 PM
Hi there, nice moody landscape. I would suggest to leave out some of those dark parts that don't show anything but black.
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| Photo By: Linda Kajári
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
12/29/2006 12:50:26 PM
Hi there. Looks like a different crop would go better with the subject.
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| Photo By: D e b
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
12/29/2006 12:36:22 PM
Hi there, looks rather well! Good use of flash! The only suggestion I'd have is to crop the whole thing so as not to get the horizon in the middle. The only problem remaining is that electricity line... Another position perhaps?
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| Photo By: Petter Lövgren
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
12/27/2006 3:07:53 PM
Hi Teunis, Yep, it's the mill just accross the Berkmeer molen in Obdam. Yet again, I would suggest a different crop, in order to displace the main subject from the middle of the frame.
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
12/26/2006 2:18:51 PM
Tsss... Obdam Alkmaar noemen... Het is trouwens zo'n beetje in m'n achtertuin genomen. De molenaar heet Arie. In mijn portfolio zul je hem herkennen als de molen in de vroege ochtend sneeuw.
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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Critique By:
Rutger van Soelen (K:1337)
12/26/2006 2:11:16 PM
Hi, well seen. But again bothered with the cropping...
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| Photo By: Teunis Haveman
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