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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/28/2005 1:59:11 PM
Thanks! This was shot with the E-10's MCON-35 macro extension lens. I didn't do much to the original image besides tweak the levels.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/26/2005 12:44:30 PM
I agree with Judith, the telephone line is a bit of a distraction from the very strong "V" lines in the photo. A very striking composition overall. Nice work.
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| Photo By: osvaldo rima
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/26/2005 12:43:13 PM
You really get the feeling of dawn from this picture, as if the airport (and the world) was just waking up. Very nice B&W tones and detail, particularly in the foreground. I like the composition as well with the single human figure giving the photo a bit of context. Nice image!
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Photo By: Sebastian Zachariah
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/26/2005 12:38:45 PM
Thanks for the feedback! Looks from your portfolio like you're taking pretty nice macro shots already.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/26/2005 2:57:18 AM
Please don't comment on my images if you're going to leave completely non-descriptive one-liners. I don't care if you like the image or not. It's a waste of time.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 10:56:56 PM
I see what you mean about the sixties look. Good use of color! I might try to wash out some of the detail even a little bit more to go for a more iconic look.
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| Photo By: Jennifer Jones
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 10:55:27 PM
Very nice shot. I'd like to see a large version or print... I'll bet the texture on the side of that building(?) is beautiful.
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| Photo By: Pedro P. Palma
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 10:37:21 PM
Gorgeous shot. I like how the desaturation of most of the image brings out the red of the dials. Excellent DOF as well. Thanks for sharing it!
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| Photo By: Morgan Estill
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 6:51:46 PM
Very strong lines and nice, warm tones. That little hint of red on the roof is really nice.
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| Photo By: huan duong
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 6:49:03 PM
Well, I really like both shots. But I think color is the best choice for this one. The warm tones of the light enhance the picture's texture. With BW, you would lose the warmth and the tone of the picture would change.
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| Photo By: Todd Weeks
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 6:45:02 PM
It's illegal to boat here. 90% of the time the river is running too quickly anyway.
With a boat or other object the shot would be too cluttered anyway. I like the lines of the shot the way they are.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 5:23:44 PM
Wow. I got a shiver just looking at this. Reminds me of an evening in rural Virginia growing up. Very nice shot with excellent capture of the shadows and light.
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| Photo By: raf .
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/25/2005 5:22:02 PM
Thanks, John! That's high praise coming from a photographer like yourself.
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/20/2005 2:18:43 PM
Thanks for the input! You might be right about the frame... I haven't really experimented with that concept yet.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/15/2005 12:04:54 PM
Thanks for the detailed suggestions! The photograph is of an iron support bar embedded in concrete. Had I to do it again I would have made sure the edge of the bar was fully in focus.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/12/2005 2:36:16 AM
Nice pose: give your thanks to the cat.  Good conversion to B&W.. you didn't lose much detail and the whiskers look beautiful.
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| Photo By: Shizuka Goto
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/12/2005 12:10:28 AM
Nicely done. I agree about the crop. It's amazing how you were able to capture enough light from the fireworks to illuminate the scene below.
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| Photo By: Steven Keys
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
7/12/2005 12:08:15 AM
The slight softness of the contrast gives you a nice range of shadows and light across the stairs. Nicely done!
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| Photo By: Branimir Fagarazzi
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/28/2005 3:50:17 AM
Very nice framing. You made the right choice in converting to B&W.
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| Photo By: Rodney Steele
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/28/2005 3:49:48 AM
You've caught him in a wonderful pose. Nice work!
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| Photo By: Rebecca Raybon
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/28/2005 3:48:31 AM
A really gorgeous sky, and a nice soft touch of light on the buildings. Thanks for sharing!
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| Photo By: Rodney Steele
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/28/2005 3:47:02 AM
I too am sorry to hear of your loss. You've found a wonderful way of expressing it here... a really special photograph.
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| Photo By: Mark Hamilton
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/28/2005 3:44:33 AM
Beautifully luminous. Very nice.
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| Photo By: Jani Salvataggio
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
1/26/2005 7:54:50 PM
Thanks for the nice words, all!
I wish I could have missed that car, too. Unfortunately the road is quite busy...
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
10/7/2004 3:21:32 PM
It's not your eye, the photo is a green duotone, with the green extracted from the tree color. I'm sorry if this bothers you, but it was an intentional effect.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
10/4/2004 12:39:12 PM
Yikes! Nice shot, though. The green element on the wall brings the scene together.
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| Photo By: Mark Hamilton
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
10/4/2004 12:36:46 PM
It's a seed... they sort of helicopter down from the tree when they're ready to fall. Perhaps they're unique to the part of the world I live in...
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
9/30/2004 9:43:56 PM
Beautiful stuff. I'd love to see this series together in a gallery setting, so I could take the whole thing in.
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| Photo By: Mark Hamilton
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
9/29/2004 5:08:17 PM
There's definitely too much white on the right side of the image. Had I been thinking, I wouldn't have shot the leaf against the sky. Some cropping might help, but it's not my strongest try.
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| Photo By: A.T. Sarazin
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Critique By:
A.T. Sarazin (K:1336)
9/29/2004 3:58:52 PM
Thanks, Mark. That's a cool perspective on the image. The barn these animals were in had really nice, limited lighting that cast long shadows on the animals. I enjoyed taking the picture and kinda wish I had more opportunity to take pictures of livestock.
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