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Critique By:
Ms. Mel Brackstone (K:5285)
3/2/2006 6:23:13 AM
I'd say you've done well. As long as you keep in mind that the brightest spots will attract the viewers eyes (in general) the man's ring is a little distracting, as well as the over-bright white of the left eye. Perhaps a reflector on his left could have softened the shadow and lowered the contrast between his eyes and skin.....I'm a newbie as well, so thats only my uninformed opinion. 
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Critique By:
Jonathan Karwacki (K:1105)
3/1/2006 8:19:26 PM
I like the compostion, the kleenex on the bed makes me think she has been crying, it gives a sad tone to the photo. the woman in the background ads to that feeling, both women seem lonely. the photo does seem a little flat, a bit more contrast would help
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Critique By:
Romy Fabian Garmaz (K:17105)
2/22/2006 5:32:46 PM
Mat
Excellent job
Romy
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Critique By:
Kambiz K (K:37420)
2/22/2006 5:11:21 PM
it is similar to those sci fi movies. i like that smoky color
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Critique By:
Gavino Tavera (K:424)
2/20/2006 12:15:46 PM
Impressive. Excellent prospect. Everything is in the right place (the clouds, the old pole on the right) and colours are superb.
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Critique By:
z z (K:7231)
2/14/2006 8:01:42 PM
I love the natural lighting. It adds a bit of mystery to the darkened areas. The only thing that is a bit distracting is the shape of the catch light on the left side eye. Its bright white pops out of the darkened areas - maybe a little burning to take the brightness down...course that is MHO. Well done regardless.
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
2/14/2006 6:21:31 PM
wonderful portrait and with very effective lighting and contrast , all of the best my friend .
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Critique By:
Ozgur Ipek (K:1922)
2/8/2006 7:25:38 PM
very dramatic, nice shot, best regards....
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Critique By:
André Bermak (K:14443)
2/8/2006 5:48:34 PM
Excelente "street shot" e composição!!!! Gostei da perspectiva que você usou......
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Critique By:
p e t a . (K:18700)
2/5/2006 10:35:02 PM
Looks like my kind of beach. Gorgeous colours. Just a shame you've got so much noise in the sky.
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Critique By:
Annemette Rosenborg Eriksen (K:55244)
2/5/2006 8:49:13 PM
You really captured the scene beautifully! I was out swimming with those stingrays in September. What a great experience, and it puts a smile on my face watching your photo!:-)
Best of wishes,
Annemette
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Critique By:
jacques brisebois (K:73883)
2/5/2006 6:50:14 PM
seems to be a very nice place. great clear water.
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Critique By:
Bebe Kaan (K:18)
2/5/2006 6:23:51 PM
Bonjour,
J'adore les couleurs de votre photo et j'aime bien les photos ou se trouve la mer surtout que ici elle est transparente.
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Critique By:
Shirley Grove (K:5514)
2/5/2006 6:05:52 PM
Very beautiful scene - and the colour of the water is unreal!! Not sure if I'd be too happy if those StingRays were swimming towards me!!
Regards
Shirley
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Critique By:
lius hanzen (K:2844)
11/29/2005 8:00:58 AM
nice smile she have,love it..nice shoot
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Critique By:
Jim Budrakey (K:24393)
11/29/2005 6:35:16 AM
I really like the pose and you caught a great smile. I have to agree with Steve about the lighting. It looks like the light is directly on her. It would be more effective if you placed it more to the side - it would bring out more interesting shadows in her face. If the shadow side is too dark, you could use a reflector (a piece of foam core board works well and is quite inexpensive) to fill in. Still, this is nice work. I am looking forward to seeing your future portraits.
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Critique By:
Steve Aronoff (K:18393)
11/29/2005 12:44:49 AM
I like this portrait very much as well. The only suggestion I might make would be to temper the contrast between the right and left sides of the face. The way the subject's hair curls down over the face makes the lighting appear to be concentrated above the curl.
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Critique By:
jacques brisebois (K:73883)
11/28/2005 11:07:01 PM
wonderful natural capture, she really have a nice smile. Really like it the way you shoot her.
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Critique By:
p e t a . (K:18700)
11/24/2005 10:08:02 PM
cool shot. been done lots though, show us something more creative
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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
11/24/2005 10:03:21 AM
Great in B+W, nice and sharp, nice composition!
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Critique By:
Sergio M. Cameno (K:7856)
11/24/2005 8:22:12 AM
Very original idea, I like it very much, congrats!
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Critique By:
Branimir Fagarazzi (K:38367)
11/24/2005 5:31:38 AM
Good.6/7
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Critique By:
Gavino Tavera (K:424)
9/15/2005 10:05:31 PM
Very good shot.
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Critique By:
Bradley Prue (K:30678)
9/11/2005 5:58:18 AM
I absolutely LOVE the mood that you created here, Matthew! Rich, dramatic lighting, and the nostalgic Tricycle is the perfect subject for this atmosphere. ...Brad
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Critique By:
mundh (K:3974)
9/11/2005 5:07:50 AM
this is a great artistic photo even the colors are great, as banna said the croppin is good too. great job
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Critique By:
Mohamed Banna (K:34237)
9/11/2005 5:02:02 AM
great perfect strong angle
and cropping
nice dramatic colors and tones
7+++++
well done
i lik eit
very artistic and creative
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Critique By:
Kathy Hillard (K:25721)
9/10/2005 3:48:31 AM
This is just beautiful, Matthew! I love the colors and the reflection. The rowboat in the foreground is perfect. Love it!
Kathy
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
9/10/2005 2:03:14 AM
Interesante contraluz.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
p e t a . (K:18700)
9/7/2005 11:56:16 PM
I'm surprised to see you get so few comments, your stuff is fantastic! I'll be wataching
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p e t a . (K:18700)
9/7/2005 11:54:25 PM
awesome matthew! so glad you commented on my shot so I could now check your work out..this is so cool. I've always wanted to try that!
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