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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Man oh man do I wish I took this :P The tonality is spot on, it has personality with the broken letters, and the composition flows well.
Want to swap for one of my prints?
Alisa
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| Photo By: Christian Wettergren
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Well the guy in the background can always be cloned out Mickey :P
I think I metered on a neutral shade somewhere besides him, but I can't remember. Can't I just cheat and say I ment to do that to have the photo tell a story? 
Anyway thanks Mickey , Jeff and Christian for commenting.
Christian -
Yes you got it, this is Market St >:0)
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Thanks Branislav, Ersin, aj, Edward, Peter, Todd, John, and Priyadarshi.
Here it is in b&w.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Such intensity of emotion and color. They seem to conflict with each other. Alisa
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| Photo By: Ersin Tek
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Dubravko -
It was just too ordinary in b&w  I had to add a twist to it somehow. This c-41 processing adds a twinge of green to this film. Of course I liked how this looked so I decided to play with it.
Jeff -
I did dodge some of the photo but strangely enough that part just happend to of gotten some light. I was actually going to burn some in cause it looked so fake, but decided not to.
I was so excited by the view of this scene that it went against my nature of turning away from a subject if it's been overdone.
I was driving back from the beach when I drove through here.
Thanks everyone for taking the time to comment.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
I have this thing with bright colors that contrast the dinginess of their surroundings, so of course this struck my eye. For my taste a bit more of a tonal range would add nicely so there's more of distinct flow of dark to light.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Christian Wettergren
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
What a find! Seems like we not only have a simular taste in bathrooms but decay as well. The toning of this was a perfect call, or was this the actual color?
Alisa
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| Photo By: Christian Wettergren
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Such drama Mickey! I can't really find anything wrong with this one. This belongs on a book or the opening of a movie. The border was a nice touch.
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
I am so loving the bright color balance that is breaking up the grey. The joy of the girl is also a nice contrast to her surroundings. The only thing buggin' me is the artifacting like it might of been oversharpend.
Alisa
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| Photo By: markus andersson
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Bold rich colors that make the dramatic angle stand out even more.
Whoo hoo Roy! This is one of my favs or yours lately.
Alisa
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
07/04/2003 Paulo Carrasco (Karma: 381)
Great composition and good choice of tones.
Regards.
07/04/2003 Cinzia Gregorutti (Karma: 1,782)
fantastic!!!
07/04/2003 Elangovan S 2003DONOR (Karma: 5,479)
Ealier feet picture was not a bad one to me!! :-)) Sai, had a different ideas...
Coming to this picture. So cheeewt. Very nice idea and certailny feel the touch here. Beautiful picutre. Love this. I like tones and vignetting effect to create a framing to this beautiful subject.
Do you have any more ideas for subject "feet"? Maybe we should suggest Al for a new project... "The Increadible, Non smelly Feet"! What say? :-)
Elangs.
07/04/2003 Jose Rasquinho (Karma: 1,888)
Nice idear and good shot! Very good tone.
Regards.
*Comments pasted back in after I nuked the first version of this*
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
So many converging lines with bold colors! Try tilting this about .5% to the right and this will be stronger.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Jose Rasquinho
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Shadows mixing with the bright light, streaking through the dark. A bit haunting.
How beyond cool John! I so hope you have more coming.
Alisa
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| Photo By: John Charlton
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Oops...
I think with more contrast this would work better. It's too flat for my taste.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Chad Simcox
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Well if he can get into art school than I is applying as well
NO, tagging is wrong but I still can't help be excited when I see it in the environment of the abondoned. I so enjoy using it in my compositions.
Alisa
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
I don't mind the mid-day light with this. The colors actually work ok. Did you try that twilight filter as well though?
Nice call with the composition of the door. It provides just the right amount of tension/movement.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Larry Edwards
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
The color just knocks your socks off. Always makes an interesting abstract when a human element is added.
Alisa
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| Photo By: markus andersson
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
The tree does break up the lines but I don't think it takes away from the visual apeal of the photo. I would love to see these as a triptych. Interesting - the selective focus being all to the left.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Terry Irwin
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
My kind of photo. The weeds make this interesting and they give the eye something to follow to each section of movement. I would like to see more contrast, but that's just my taste.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Peat Bakke
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Sean -
I love your choose of the POF on this. It does seem a bit flat though .. was this your intent? Nothing a little boosting of the contrast can't help. Still, I think the character of this really speaks.
Alisa
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| Photo By: sean slavin
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Thanks for the constructive feedback that answered my question. Mary.. you called it woman. I need to become more proficient in PS cause my dodging skills obviously suck :P
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
I feel a triptych coming on . . .
Wonderful movement. Now these are real colors - bold and striking. None of those wimpy pastels :p
Alisa
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| Photo By: Terry Irwin
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Terry! Can you please add a black frame to your high key photos? Something gets lost when they get washed out with the background.
Eye catching bold colors and fun perspective with this one
Alisa
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Thanks for the comments.
I think this is called a cocker? Didn't really want to use that as the title. I think they are used to insallate houses.
Bill is right.. this one would be so much better tac sharp.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
. I would also like to see this with a tight black frame so it does not get washed out with the background.
Alisa
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Waiting for a flight, just left family for a month of work, staring out into the emptiness of the field....
One of my favorites of yours that screams with a story.
Congrats on the EC.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Stephen Laszlo
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
Interesting. What about having it so it's not so centered? I don't mind the soft focus, but have you tried it sharp as well?
I'm enjoying the tonality. I'm also enjoying your take on the world.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Terry Irwin
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
OHHHHHHH Bev! An abstract flower shot.. this I must try.
Alisa
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| Photo By: Beverly Gustafson
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
It is good to see you around again
Perfect dof, bold colors and sharpeness. National Geographic would eat this up.
Now back to the abstracts...
Alisa
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| Photo By: Chris Whaley
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Critique By:
Alisa Mudge (K:7511)
2/13/2004 3:06:14 PM
This is diffently your painterly style M&M. Love the moving white, breaking up the muted soft colors. I'm wondering what it might look like if the hot spot was toned down, but that just might be a web thing.
Alisa
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