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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
8/1/2011 7:07:11 AM
For a Finn I learned it is very unusual to be this creative and emotional ........but you are.......... good ..... love the whole package of toys and poem.
Harry
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Critique By:
Maj . (K:3053)
6/12/2010 10:29:37 PM
"my,my"...
there is a lot of complexity in a seemingly empty board and a lot of untold mistery in all its simplicity.
I like the poetry, and I love the symbolism emanating from this simple white ...."perpective ".
:)
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
6/2/2010 3:28:31 PM
oh my my....
I do believe that everybody has a different perspective
but in poetry that shouldn't be
perhaps if I explain
as the song says
"It’s not easy to be this complicated
Cause I lose my way"
so She(Cady Groves) is running away from a Complicated life that She cannot follow a straight path,
so as I walked in the white-sanded beaches of Pensacola
I remembered the song
Pensacola's sand is so white as snow, indeed
and light color represents to wish or to desire
and the the barely golden shade of the sand
just gave my shot a attractive point of view
Dreams and wishes are represented by a bloom characteristic
but "to want" is a reality
in Cady Groves' song I found 3 climaxes
"cause I wanna be a pirate,"
when She sings that phrase, a feeling of the unkown is shown,
"that’s one thing I’ve decided"
here, She wishes and desires
with all her might
in my shot that is represented as the first footstep
"it’s the only thing that could ever intrigue me"
She expresses that being a Pirate will be a bliss, something beautiful, and peaceful and still,
that is the second footstep in my shot.
the reason why I didn't place another footstep for the first climax was that
the first climax represented the unkown
so Pensacola's white sand inwhole represents the unkown
my... the reason of the footsteps is that I made Cady Groves the Protagonist of my shot
so as She walked through the sand, She sang "The Life of a Pirate"
sand represents a desire, something good for the feet; not like soil or mud that only represents grim facts
the footstep are different in contrast since
the latter climaxes are different feelings
the half footstep in the top part of my shot
represents the other part of the song's chorus
in reality, Cady Groves doesn't wants to be a thief or criminal as a Pirate
but just a girl who can do whatever without damaging any other person
and she can only do what she wants in the sand.
making her own path, without anyone that she will harm by doing a wrong decision.
sand will never be complicated
and is fun to be in
sand is guided by the wind and water
and by the poeple that desires it
and I feel that is "The Life of a Pirate"
Poetry has to go to the heart, since it comes from the heart
poetry is a feeling that the poet expresses and the listener feels
and unless you had met Cady Groves or you are a friend of hers
and she had already explain to you what the song feels like
you have no right to tell me what I must feel
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Critique By:
Christina Parker (K:476)
5/28/2010 6:36:25 PM
I've listen to the song, but I don't see it the way you must. I don't think there is enough contrast to see the the footsteps as one of the same. Christina
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Critique By:
Maj . (K:3053)
4/23/2010 2:12:05 AM
Symbolic and deep. I love it!
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Critique By:
Suvro Datta (K:4892)
3/11/2010 6:37:49 PM
Very nice artistic image in monochrome.
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
1/7/2010 9:53:42 PM
this is also Rukia
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Critique By:
kouichi (K:701)
1/3/2010 10:04:23 AM
i like it!
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
1/2/2010 9:46:56 PM
this is Kuchiki Rukia
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
12/30/2009 4:17:21 PM
esa es la idea
gracias
feliz ano Gust@vo Sch3v3rin
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
12/30/2009 4:03:19 PM
La idea es buena pero yo encuentro la foto muy desenfocada.
Un abrazo!
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Critique By:
Tom Ravisé (K:5082)
12/29/2009 10:26:27 PM
I like it for it ambiance. The fact that you put the noise in the front plan of your picture with a big contrast.
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
12/26/2009 5:35:44 PM
muchas gracias por su apreciacion
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Critique By:
Gustavo Scheverin (K:164501)
12/26/2009 4:54:39 AM
Muy interesante y original abstracto.
Felicitaciones!
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
12/23/2009 2:32:07 PM
kiitos=thank you
well it's Finnish and sometimes Russian
I just love them
same for my artistic name
which means John Victor the Ancestor
and thanks for the comment
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Critique By:
Maj . (K:3053)
12/22/2009 7:08:28 PM
This is actually a wonderful Rose. The color is just perfect.
The composition, centered subject the colors and the postprocessing are just right.
The language you use and you rname are very interesting, at first I thought it was slavic...?
Very tasteful portfolio.
Happy Holidays!
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Critique By:
Andrzej Fikus (K:666)
7/28/2009 9:24:35 AM
Interesting work
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Critique By:
Andrzej Fikus (K:666)
7/21/2009 8:00:37 PM
Charming and delicate
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Critique By:
Ania Blazejewska (K:23981)
1/14/2009 11:45:42 AM
nice effects
my best regards,
ania
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Critique By:
Ania Blazejewska (K:23981)
1/12/2009 12:39:23 PM
excellent effect!
I like this image very much
my best regards
ania
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Critique By:
Jonne Vihtori Åke (K:557)
1/11/2009 11:45:38 PM
Thank you Mr. Ray for your 2 detailing and interesting comments. It seems that you are a professional for you were able to be so especific in your comments. Thank you
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Critique By:
Stan Ciszek (K:56854)
1/10/2009 4:21:20 PM
Nice photoart Jonne.
More winter capture from Finland,please.
My best wishes.
Stan~
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Critique By:
stingRay pt.4 . (K:250401)
1/9/2009 1:20:44 PM
There is something very beautiful about this unusual treatment for a floral study. The blurry features have a kind of attraction, the tones are gorgeous but the vignettes in the corner are a little distracting. The idea, however, is wonderful, well done to you Jonne. All the best....Ray
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Critique By:
stingRay pt.4 . (K:250401)
1/9/2009 1:16:10 PM
A beautiful soft and delicate floral study Jonne with gorgeous tone. Well done to you. Very best wishes....Ray
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Critique By:
Ania Blazejewska (K:23981)
1/6/2009 9:57:47 AM
good with nice details
best regards
ania
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Critique By:
majid masood (K:6931)
1/3/2009 11:09:32 AM
A very nice shot! Great composition, light and color! Good Work
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Critique By:
Stan Ciszek (K:56854)
12/28/2008 9:25:41 AM
Nice colour,Jonne.
But ...???
Greeting from Canada.
Stan~
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
12/25/2008 4:12:36 PM
Hello friend from Finland. It must cold and dark up there, but the flower is nice to heat up in winter. The daughter of an ex girlfiend had a love from finland, Tomi, and married him. They live in Aulu I believe,
Merry Christmas !
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Critique By:
Mitra Nademi-Nassari (K:28234)
12/22/2008 2:19:43 AM
Lovely floral and beautiful roses. I like your choice of color tone on this image.
Regards,
Mitra
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Critique By:
M jalili (K:69009)
12/20/2008 4:07:05 PM
Really a very beautiful and a good work . 7/7 ...........
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