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Critique By:
Luis Diogo (K:6019)
7/13/2005 10:01:07 AM
Beautiful composition; fantastic sunset colour and lighting.
Regards,
Luis.
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Critique By:
mary karimi (K:10818)
7/13/2005 6:13:05 AM
Super shot, Dan, with some beautifully rich sunset colours.
mary
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Critique By:
Tobiah Deutsch (K:2432)
6/25/2005 2:09:22 PM
Dan,
I like the idea here, but its way to far away. You need to figure out a different angle to show how big that bank is. Its HUGE, but you can't see the skater and what he's doing at all right now.
Toby
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Critique By:
Aykaan K (K:13601)
6/23/2005 5:40:02 PM
superbe scène!!!!!!!!!
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Critique By:
Phillip Swanson (K:7013)
6/12/2005 4:59:28 AM
nice capture of a backside tailslide... i like the flash of the rider with a slight trail motion... great fisheye shot
phil swanson
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Critique By:
Stan Pustylnik (K:6768)
6/12/2005 2:16:10 AM
Dan, I like same type of photography, so I'll give you advice not to include unnecessary areas into photo. With your zoom lens I would zoom into to include area starting under advertisment to exclude this strange bridge like thing, and "crop" sligtly from above also.
Also faster prime wide angle lenses could be really helpful for night photography. You will get better datail and color. And take filter from your lens if you used it during daytime.
Nice long time exposure shot.
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Critique By:
Bjorn Beheydt (K:12096)
6/10/2005 12:23:40 PM
This is a great place for a sunset Dan, very well done!
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
6/9/2005 2:46:46 AM
Man, if that's what they looked like in the city I can imagine the gorgeous colour that would have been exploding in the sky somewhere with less light pollution!
I am jealous that you've got so much colour there... I've really only seen the Northern Lights a handful of times and never with such strong colour.
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
6/9/2005 2:45:15 AM
Nice DOF here to pull the bird away from the background. I think that getting a bit closer would have been nice as well, like you mentioned, but I also like having the surroundings too... gives a nice feel for the location.
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
6/9/2005 2:44:16 AM
The lines in this image are great... the sun lights them up perfectly to let my eyes roam around. Too bad about the sun flare on the right side... I learned that it's better to shoot with a prime lens when looking directly into the sun... less flare than with a zoom. The colour is very eye catching!
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Critique By:
Kim Culbert (K:37070)
6/9/2005 2:42:53 AM
I think that the light leak would have been okay if it hadn't been right over the faces... off to one side might have given it a "glow" that would have heightened the shot.
Hope you got more than just one... they look like highly photogenic people!
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Critique By:
Ahmet Baki Kocaballi (K:13618)
6/7/2005 5:19:18 PM
light is great on the rails..
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Critique By:
Roger Williams (K:86139)
6/7/2005 1:34:08 PM
Fascinating! Gives a real sense of the scale--and the skill--of the action. I'm glad you shared it with us.
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Critique By:
Roger Williams (K:86139)
6/7/2005 1:31:03 PM
Yes, this is definitely one of the best in the series. The lighting is unusual and just about perfect!
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Critique By:
Roger Williams (K:86139)
6/7/2005 1:28:31 PM
Wow, 6 x 6 colour slides! Bet they look spectacular... I see the speed was 1/30th, but I think you've frozen the action with flash, right? At least I think I see hot-spot reflections on the metal panel (LHS) and the side panel of the car (RHS), and the light/shadow on the face look like flash. It's possible to get more even illumination if you can put light-coloured panels out of the frame where they'd reflect light into it. Also a slightly different angle might have separated more between the skate boarder and those rather confusing lights off there behind him in the middle distance. But this is a difficult and rewarding subject. I'm fascinated by the whole series...
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Critique By:
Roger Williams (K:86139)
6/7/2005 1:20:15 PM
Now here's a shot I can relate to. I love my fisheye (very simiilar, at 16mm, to yours) and know how hard they are to use effectively. I know nothing about skate boarding, though... Here, I think there's a bit too much foreground, which tends to de-emphasize the figure. Maybe, if you have a good relationship with the skate boarder, try to get a little closer to him at some critical moment of arrested motion? I guess he'd have to be pretty skillful too. You also have to beware of over-bright skies when you're shooting into the light as you are here. Of course if you have the light behind you your shadow is going to be in the picture for sure! Fisheyes are hard!! It's all very well to suggest fill-in flash, but there's no flash unit going to be able to give you the angular coverage you would need.
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Critique By:
Gerhard BuschEFIAP/AFIAP (K:18382)
6/7/2005 12:04:21 PM
A very interesting light-disposition. The railroad rails illuminate prettily in the sun light. Sincerely Gerhard
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Critique By:
Guido Fulgenzi (K:6076)
6/6/2005 7:11:19 PM
Nice composition and great lighting!
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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
6/6/2005 6:37:17 PM
Great place to do this shot! I particularly like that the tracks continue along the bottom the frame.
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Critique By:
Sameer Patil (K:356)
6/6/2005 5:29:46 AM
Wow, I liked this one! In India we find the same bird here called "Chidiya" in Hindi language which means "sparrow".
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Critique By:
Jeanette Hägglund (K:59855)
6/2/2005 8:42:08 PM
Cool action scate shot!
Jeanette
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Critique By:
yasargun muslum (K:6647)
6/1/2005 8:14:03 PM
Hii,very nice foto,bravo...
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Critique By:
Scott Marceau (K:126)
5/28/2005 4:22:56 PM
very nice. i like the setting.
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Critique By:
Scott Marceau (K:126)
5/28/2005 4:20:44 PM
for sure, invest in some flashes. this is excellent though... very hard trick.
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Critique By:
Tobiah Deutsch (K:2432)
5/26/2005 6:15:10 PM
Dan,
I like the angle of this alot. I really wish there was a flash that was there to light up the skaters front side more. Perhaps then you could have closed down to ge those nifty clouds exposed right too.
Cheers,
Toby
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Critique By:
none none (K:2302)
5/26/2005 5:44:36 AM
Dan- I love your work! Your prospective of your life around you truly is reflected through your images. Well done with the action shots!
My best wishes to you and your photography,
??Ndc?
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Critique By:
Mark Sherman (K:15669)
5/15/2005 4:00:10 AM
Modernism meets skateboarding. Feels like a clip from a Hong Kong fight movie. The no trespassing just adds to the image of skateboarding.
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Critique By:
Phillip Swanson (K:7013)
5/15/2005 3:53:36 AM
nice lighting composition hotrods in background and a very nice backside blunt slide....
phil swanson
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Critique By:
André Albano (K:518)
4/1/2005 3:09:57 PM
I think the subject in the center makes the image stronger in this case.
It looks like the lines are pointing to the skater.
It really leads our eyes to the subject.
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Critique By:
Joe Teng (K:16723)
2/23/2005 8:04:26 PM
Great night action shoot! the composition is excellent and you have also manage to take quite sharp picture even at night. Well done! The depth of field is good as i can see the blur background and the man. Excellent colour especially the man jean. This look like a jean commercial shoot! Great work!
Best regard from Joe!
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