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Critique By:
Tobiah Deutsch (K:2432)
11/4/2005 3:43:49 AM
Dan,
What happened to his face?
like the comp and lighting, but no face means no in my book...
Peace,
Toby
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Critique By:
Dan Neufeld (K:349)
11/4/2005 3:27:27 AM
Thanks for all the comments.
Jef, that's the Velvia.
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Critique By:
Jeff Green (K:154)
11/3/2005 6:33:38 PM
crazy colours... is that the velvia talking or photoshop?
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
11/3/2005 4:51:19 PM
fun!
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Critique By:
Erik Neldner (K:10846)
11/3/2005 4:50:44 PM
cool stuff. nicely lit and captured sense of motion. love that fisheye!
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Critique By:
Ninni Termine (K:8990)
11/3/2005 11:38:41 AM
Extremely dynamic Shot.
Optimal street photography.
7+
Regards
Ninni
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Critique By:
Marco Donatiello (K:12147)
11/3/2005 8:07:20 AM
Uno scatto sportivo da togliere il fiato, una fotografia che ti invidio tantissimo!
Complimenti!
Ciao
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Critique By:
ISMAEL MARCOS (K:10535)
11/3/2005 7:08:47 AM
great moment
isml.
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Critique By:
Ryan Brown (K:441)
11/3/2005 6:39:56 AM
great composition and colours!
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Critique By:
Ameed El-Ghoul (K:42215)
11/3/2005 5:03:46 AM
Wonderful capture Dan, it came out just nice in spite of the difficult lighting condition, very well composed and captured,
Regards,
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Critique By:
Ms. Mel Brackstone (K:5285)
11/3/2005 4:46:22 AM
Well caught and composed, considering how tough it must be to grab such a fast-moving subject! I'd loved to have seen the skateboarder's face, but you can't have everything!
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Critique By:
Jara Parijayee (K:4964)
11/3/2005 4:42:34 AM
Powerpacked!
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Critique By:
KURT CHAMBERLIN (K:1598)
10/30/2005 4:48:47 AM
My favorite today, well done Dan
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Critique By:
Arton Humolli (R-ton) (K:1853)
10/25/2005 10:16:58 AM
perfect focus on the flower
very creative work
well done 7
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Critique By:
Marco Donatiello (K:12147)
10/18/2005 6:40:28 AM
Un ottimo scatto sportivo, effettuato con un'ottica bellissima!
Compleimenti!
Ciao
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Critique By:
p e t a . (K:18700)
10/18/2005 5:12:37 AM
sick! I want that lens! hope you got outta the way in time 
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Critique By:
Bahram Piri (K:1377)
10/18/2005 4:52:25 AM
its a very good Night Photography.
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Critique By:
Nelson Moore [Kes] - (K:20241)
10/2/2005 3:37:42 AM
Spinning around...and all looking at the camera!!!
Great capture, good job! Love those expressions...hope all ended well!
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Critique By:
Ali Naghizadeh (K:19600)
9/4/2005 12:16:26 PM
Great colors Dan .. nice silhouettes well done !!
Best regards,
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Critique By:
yasargun muslum (K:6647)
9/4/2005 10:58:56 AM
Hii,very nice kompozisyone....
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Critique By:
rafal ' mojalewastopa ' karpinski (K:504)
8/28/2005 11:15:04 AM
..damn good shot..!
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Critique By:
Mohamed Banna (K:34237)
8/16/2005 3:23:19 PM
great well done abstract
with amzing colors
i love this degree of green beside the silver
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Critique By:
Mohamed Banna (K:34237)
8/16/2005 3:05:19 PM
at the first i was thinking its a shade
but now i see the strong angle you shot
very nice cngle,, well handeled
amazing sky color shares the t lamp the perfection pf this great abstract
well done bty allmean ,, all my best regards
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
8/16/2005 3:00:12 PM
Simple but effective shot, Dan. The angle prevvents the composition from being static, and the details of the clouds above add to the image. It definitely has the feeling of the falling dusk, but I also find the image a bit empty. The lamp post acts as an eyecatcher, but IMO, that's not enough to take this out of the ordinary. The shot is effective in terms of composition and mood.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
8/16/2005 2:57:49 PM
Hi Dan, Good capture of textures and tones, and I think the rather minimalistic composition works well here. The fact that I ahve no clue what I'm looking at only adds to the appeal of this shot. Mabye a tad more space on top, allowing for the green to pass above the metal ring and whachamacallit could've balanced the composition a bit better.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Susie OConnor (K:34798)
8/12/2005 5:17:47 AM
This caught my eye as a thumbnail but I didn't realize how immense this pipe was until I saw the person inside! Nice capture.
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Critique By:
Dan Neufeld (K:349)
7/18/2005 3:18:02 AM
Thanks for the comments.
John, thank you for the constructive critique. I see what you mean about the power lines, right in the middle. Sometimes I'm in a rush to take a photo, but I'm getting better at slowing down and looking at everything in the viewfinder.
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Critique By:
John Lamb (K:9687)
7/16/2005 6:03:05 AM
Taking up your challenge Dan, for a meaningful critique.
At first view a competent picture with reasonable control of the exposure and use of the space within the frame.
However, I think you could have added more impact. The power lines sit mid-frame. A slightly higher or lower view point could improve the dynamic of the composition. Have you tried flipping the picture right to left. I think it reads better that way.
All critiques are subjective but I have noticed that pictures that are warmer in tone seem to attract more comments on Usefilm.
Regards John
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
7/15/2005 9:33:00 AM
Hi Dan, Had to think about this image for a while; the (flash) light from the side is spectacular; it empahsises the slant in the bank, but also illustrates the direction of the course of action very well. This makes it quite powerful.
I do think the division of the frame, with the large dark area in the lower part of the image is a bit too much. Also, I would consider concising the view a bit; the overview of the setting, gradually fading out the structures to near black provides a lot of information that is peripheral to the subject and the tension created by the things to happen, thus reducing the power of the image. I realise this is very much influenced by taste and other subjective criteria. I fiddled around with your photo a bit; hope you don't mind. Per attached a slightly altered but severely cropped version.
Cheers,
Hugo
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Critique By:
Richard Thornton (K:26442)
7/14/2005 11:13:02 AM
You've done a good job with exposure extremes here, despite you unfamiliarity with really good Nikon equipment. (no, just kidding, really.) I like the obvious perspective and diagonal leading lines, ending at the vanishing point on the horizon. The dramatic sky, echoed in the reflected water, adds to the effect. I can't tell if the water is runoff from the road or a canal, but it doesn't matter as far as it working as a photograph.
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