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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 9:37:45 PM
That is a play I play thousand times when I was small, because I grew up beside a big lake, of course Johana and Veronika tried their best, good job...in slovak they call it "making frogs", quite interesting.
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 9:34:50 PM
They are talking about reed catkins or the fluffy ends of reed...
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 9:31:50 PM
That is again the beautiful Lake Vojka which is connected with the Danube. It is a good place for swimming in Summer, or to forget the tense city life.
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 9:27:54 PM
It was quite cold. Johana and Veronika were playing the game "breaking glass"
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 9:22:23 PM
We took a trip on Sunday to Vojka. That is a small village in the Slovak - Hungarian border, about 50km from Bratislav center. It is actually on an island. We visit Vojka quite often because my wife's grandma lives there in a senior house.
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 2:58:40 PM
I made a mistake. THis is the one with the apples. 
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
2/2/2005 2:53:28 PM
I attach another two related pictures. One will find two beautiful apples bound to the red basket.
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Critique By:
Kay McIntire (K:11787)
2/1/2005 2:10:55 PM
GREAT job, Paul! You got the contrast and brightness right on! Veronica sure is looking cute here. You do indeed have THREE beautiful daughters!
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Critique By:
Samantha P (K:1961)
2/1/2005 9:29:50 AM
Paul; you have one gorgeous daughter!! Beautiful photo!
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Critique By:
Tiffany Hix (K:5012)
2/1/2005 4:44:26 AM
Wonderful! A child nursing is such a wonderful moment to cherish.
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Critique By:
Kay McIntire (K:11787)
1/31/2005 6:06:35 PM
PRECIOUS!!! I think it looks wonderful in black and white. The contrast is fine to me. What don't you like about it? I can give you some other black and white techniques that will give you more control over the channels that you use (thus more contrast in the areas you want it).
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Critique By:
Ori Vidra (K:3214)
1/31/2005 1:44:48 PM
This is a tender moment and great composed,
I have looked at your portfolio, It is very nice although you have a lack of contrast in many of your shots. I get the same with my 300D (have to use PS to fix it).
Anyway it is also a matter of personal taste
Th'x for your comment, Ori.
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
1/31/2005 10:34:15 AM
Paul excellent shot
Great love in this photograph
I like your photo,s from children
Teunis
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Critique By:
Teunis Haveman (K:37426)
1/31/2005 9:27:26 AM
Paul. Lovely
Teunis
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Critique By:
Olga Vareli (K:22477)
1/31/2005 9:22:00 AM
wonderful, tender, congratulations!
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Critique By:
Ori Vidra (K:3214)
1/31/2005 9:04:21 AM
Good shot although it lacks contrast for my taste
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Critique By:
Kay McIntire (K:11787)
1/30/2005 4:54:54 PM
She's a beauty! I am glad she is feeling better now. I like the bright colors in her hair and her shirt. Window light is good here- could be a little brighter- or made a little brighter in PS. Got to learn it, Paul!
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Critique By:
cessy karina (K:14205)
1/30/2005 7:05:15 AM
oh poor Johana, she is very sensitive child. lovely portrait
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Critique By:
Pat Fruen (K:12076)
1/29/2005 3:53:12 PM
Beautiful light and shadow.
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Critique By:
Pat Fruen (K:12076)
1/29/2005 3:52:07 PM
Love those two little faces together.
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Critique By:
Carolyn Wiesbrock (K:14051)
1/29/2005 12:48:19 PM
Nice tone and a good candid shot!
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
1/29/2005 12:18:19 PM
Thank you all, my dear friends. Good luck to your photographing. Paul
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Critique By:
Rachel Leah (K:26110)
1/29/2005 2:23:55 AM
She is adorable! I love her expression and the coloring looks very nice as well! I love the candidness of this... excellent work!
~Rachel~
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Critique By:
Kay McIntire (K:11787)
1/29/2005 12:35:52 AM
Cute, Paul. I imagine the 50 mm is better for portraits. You will enjoy the 28-75 more when you take landscape pix. Thanks for sending me the info on lag times of different cameras. It was news to me! They are all still much better than the first digital cameras. I still like the d70- but the Canon's price may be too hard for me to pass up!
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Critique By:
Pat Fruen (K:12076)
1/28/2005 11:11:33 PM
Nice, candid, everyday moment. I think this would be even more timeless in black and white.
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Critique By:
Paul T. Yung (K:984)
1/4/2005 8:02:40 AM
Thank you Howie, Marcus and David. I am happy that you like it.
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Critique By:
David Hofmann (K:22223)
1/4/2005 1:05:27 AM
the feather doesn't bother me a bit. I'll be happy to take it out for you if you want. It is a very good portrait, with a nice soft light. I"d brighten it up a little and pump up the contrast, but that's minor things.
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Critique By:
Marcus Armani (K:36599)
1/4/2005 12:25:50 AM
beautiful portrait, such a lovely young girl, I love the soft lighting and beautiful expression, she looks like a little angel... well done...
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Critique By:
Howie Mudge (K:27933)
1/3/2005 11:35:59 PM
I like the low light here and I think its a very nice portrait of a pretty young lady. well done.
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Critique By:
Rachel Leah (K:26110)
1/2/2005 11:02:59 PM
Great portrait! The girl is adorable! I love her expression, great job capturing it! I think it would look nice with a little bit more contrast... but nice work either way
~Rachel~
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