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Critique By:
Stefan Engström (K:24473)
8/23/2003 11:38:13 PM
Interesting that you put this in the project "reflections", suggesting that you really intend that the upper right should be part of the composition.
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Critique By:
Matej Maceas (K:24381)
8/22/2003 10:03:49 AM
A promising scene, but the composition and lighting could be better. If you'll have an opportunity to reshoot this, I would recommend to point the camera more to the left. That would
1) move the angel off-centre,
2) get rid of the rightmost part, which, I agree with Mark, doesn't add much to the picture
3) lose the highlights in the top right area.
I'd like to stress the third point. Those highlights are quite strong, creating an area that is in high contrast to the rest of the photo, thus drawing the viewer's attention away from the important part of the scene - the angel and the people on the left. Which brings me to my final point - expose for the left side of the pic, which is currently underexposed.
If you can't reshoot, I'd recommend a more-or-less square crop, doing away with the right part of the pic, and then lightening the photo up.
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
8/21/2003 10:33:49 PM
I think it needs some cropping, especially the right 1/5th because I like the lines of the main building as it disappears into the narrow street. If you crop out the right 1/5th, it gets more emphasis.
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Critique By:
Egidija Smilingiene (K:3227)
8/18/2003 2:06:09 AM
lovely picture.. i had same kind dog 10 years ago. i miss it very much..
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Gabriel Dias (K:468)
8/17/2003 5:25:06 PM
Que engraçada esta foto!!!
Abraço Gabriel Dias
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Robert Gaither (K:34128)
8/17/2003 7:22:56 AM
Excellent image and portrait.
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Critique By:
Richard Thornton (K:26442)
8/17/2003 3:35:22 AM
Beautiful model. Maybe you could try a portrait using the portrait format (vertical orientation) sometime.
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Critique By:
lowell whipple girbes (K:13151)
8/16/2003 6:41:01 PM
me like it
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Critique By:
Alex Uchôa (K:18547)
8/16/2003 2:02:05 PM
Gostei do modo como você trabalhou a luz de forma seletiva para iluminar apenas o rosto da modelo. Abraço!
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Petros Stamatakos (K:12101)
8/16/2003 12:25:29 AM
Cute dogs malaka.
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
8/16/2003 12:02:01 AM
It reminds me of those 'B' movies from the 1950's and 1960's.
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
8/15/2003 11:59:22 PM
Oh, I love dachshunds! I like how you transformed the couch into a very nice backdrop. Their position in the frame cannot be any better. They are perfectly placed.
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Critique By:
Lorita Damas (K:1035)
8/15/2003 8:03:36 PM
Gosto deste retrato.
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Critique By:
Amancio Couto (K:15720)
8/15/2003 7:43:03 PM
O like that light!...
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Critique By:
Flavio Trindade (K:1023)
8/15/2003 7:03:21 PM
linda modelo, optima expressao! adorei a cor da foto! parabens!
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Critique By:
Diana Cornelissen (K:26437)
8/15/2003 6:05:25 PM
Very nice portrait Carlos. I like the sepia colors. Maybe you could add just a bit more lightning and contrast, but that is very personal. Regards,
Diana.
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Critique By:
Paco Ferrer (K:8586)
8/14/2003 6:12:49 PM
Muy buen retrato!!!
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Critique By:
Evangelo Sacchi Rezende (K:195)
8/12/2003 5:10:21 AM
Legal!
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Critique By:
Evangelo Sacchi Rezende (K:195)
8/12/2003 5:09:27 AM
Muito bacana essa foto!
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Critique By:
Evangelo Sacchi Rezende (K:195)
8/12/2003 5:07:07 AM
Muito bacana!
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Critique By:
Javed Rassi (K:8223)
8/11/2003 8:32:42 PM
Lovely faces, good shot.
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Critique By:
Lexie Summers (K:2027)
8/11/2003 7:56:34 PM
How cute!! I like the natural lighting.
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Critique By:
André Bermak (K:14443)
8/11/2003 7:01:14 PM
Boa composição.
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Critique By:
Louise Vessey (K:13862)
8/10/2003 9:08:27 AM
Nice mood. I like the vignette and sepia treatment.
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Critique By:
Daniel Lozano (K:1162)
8/9/2003 2:49:44 PM
Hello Carlos 
I feel a softer image could be better. I would leave the background as is but crop a little tighter.
the toning seems a little strong too, if you intend to keep the tone as is, maybe you could also increase the contrast to make the photo a little more dramatic.
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Critique By:
Yutaka Itinose (K:22586)
8/9/2003 2:49:05 PM
Very nice portrait! Intellectual eyes!
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Critique By:
Evangelo Sacchi Rezende (K:195)
8/9/2003 6:57:54 AM
Mó legal!
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Critique By:
Fabio Keiner (K:81109)
8/9/2003 2:58:30 AM
impresionante y duradero en sus insinuaciones
bienvenido en usefilm!
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| Photo By: Carlos Sabino Villalba
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Critique By:
Mike Gray (K:19)
8/8/2003 5:40:23 PM
Talk about abstract! Like it.
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