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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/10/2003 8:16:28 AM
Marion:
The above photo is a two part process. Made a blured print and then placed the object on the print and rephotographed.
Thanks for your inquiry
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Marvin Wax
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/10/2003 7:57:17 AM
Uldra:
Your doing good work. I thought the green shadow could have been a bit desaturated. Love your composition and the joy that you demonstrate. I hope your life brings you more images.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Uldra Johnson
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/9/2003 10:43:39 PM
I like this on a lot. Permit me to add the following comment:
The outer framing and content appear a bit too light. A darker surrounding would put focus on your central image.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Uldra Johnson
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/9/2003 10:34:24 PM
The mystery and surreal is wonderful!
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Uldra Johnson
(K:683)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/9/2003 10:29:39 PM
Wonderful architectural study, good composition.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Wuyuan Sun
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/7/2003 8:03:31 PM
Marion,
You have done it again, the design and concept is wonderful
Thank you
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Marion Luijten
(K:6141)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/7/2003 8:01:18 PM
I like your use of color and design to create a powerful and simple vision
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| Photo By: Marion Luijten
(K:6141)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/4/2003 9:40:39 AM
Good vision, Good design and composition....
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Ken Richardson
(K:1381)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/2/2003 9:33:32 PM
Love your total vision. A portrait that is beyond the ordinary. An original touch and flair. Love the glimpse of her in the mirror.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Kristupa Saragih
(K:1031)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
7/2/2003 4:29:16 PM
Shai:
My personal choice. Photo demonstrates good composition, color and visual impact. Like the strong graphic approach.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Shai Ritblatt
(K:3755)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/30/2003 9:33:03 PM
Jimmye,
It is delightful to view a photgrapher that demonstrates passion for his work with a designer's eye. Thanks for the visual treat.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Jimmye Brizendine
(K:888)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/30/2003 12:34:26 AM
Judy:
If there is something damn good there is nothing to say.
You have wetted my appetite for more.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Judy Kessler
(K:6316)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/30/2003 12:02:15 AM
Estevao:
A wonderful usage of light and color with good composition.
Not just another flower shot.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Estevao Jose
(K:6115)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/29/2003 11:23:12 PM
Gil,
I did not know that you are into dentistry. Was this before the extraction or after. Talk to you latter.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Gil Draper
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/29/2003 10:51:05 PM
Jim,
I like this one. A very different and unique capture of the evening light and portrayal of the changing sky.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Jim Harrison
(K:56)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/29/2003 10:46:34 PM
Love your humor-concept. Thanks for the laugh.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Kosmas Lazaridis
(K:943)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/29/2003 10:40:14 AM
Gil:
This photo shows class. One of my favorites.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Gil Draper
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/28/2003 10:21:35 PM
Judy:
As a graphic designer and photographer, I am delighted to look at your work....keep the art coming...thanks.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Judy Kessler
(K:6316)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/28/2003 9:38:12 PM
Interesting creature and photo. Photo could be improved with more space around subject, particularly above the head. The body is cut off on the left at an awkward place. Green shape in the background somewhat distracting,,,,Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: LIM CH
(K:1605)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/28/2003 1:33:49 PM
Scarlet
I appreciate your vision.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: scarlet james
(K:778)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/28/2003 1:01:41 PM
THE IMAGE IS GREAT...If you move the center subject to the right
a bit, the image would compose and balance better....Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Megan Forbes
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/27/2003 11:49:14 PM
Peter
I love the mystery and dark mood
A good phiograph to say the least......Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Peter Burda
(K:4807)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/27/2003 11:45:57 PM
Good observation...photo holds together..perhaps a bit more saturation might be benificial.....Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: kees colijn
(K:195)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/27/2003 11:40:25 PM
Intriguing, Love the light on the subject. Very partial to the warm tones. Thanks...Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: R. W.
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/27/2003 10:00:54 AM
Carol,
I like your imagery that records a very tender happening. Improvement might occur if you cut back on this very bold black border, and perhaps a bit more space surrounding the nests.
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| Photo By: Carol Watson
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/25/2003 8:58:08 AM
Jinhyung
The wonderful portrayal and beautiful innocence of a child. Love your window lighting and gentleness of vision.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Jinhyung Park
(K:0)
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/24/2003 11:52:58 PM
Sunsets are beautiful
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| Photo By: Kaj Nielsen
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Critique By:
Marvin Wax (K:148)
6/24/2003 11:39:44 PM
Kaj:
Sunsets are always beautiful and dramatic. It is hard to insert your own personality in an obvious colorful and appealing photo.
The composition could be improved slightly if the boat was a bit more to the right. Forgive me if I am a bit harsh.
Marvin Wax
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| Photo By: Kaj Nielsen
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