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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
11/24/2003 5:38:04 AM
You need to get closer to him and get a full face shot. Remember, zoom with your feet.
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Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
11/24/2003 5:29:24 AM
My god it's my primary school friend John Kelly. I wonder what had happened to him.
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
11/12/2003 6:33:32 AM
He's BAAAAACK! Simply superb Steve.
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| Photo By: Steve Kompier
(K:4629)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
11/2/2003 11:32:57 PM
Alisa, you have to walk backward to get the rest of the picture. Zoom with Your Feet.
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
(K:7511)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
11/1/2003 6:45:14 AM
Wow terrific, JT. This is worthy of a calendar page. Great thing is you can't tell which airline so you can sell the image to Boeing and any carrier that flies 747-400's. Truly beautiful. I guess getting up early that morning paid off.
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| Photo By: Jeroen Wenting
(K:25317)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
10/23/2003 11:09:25 PM
Fabulous lighting. Wow, you're so good.
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| Photo By: Larry Edwards
(K:843)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
8/17/2003 9:13:28 PM
I don't like the lightpole cutting through the "C" in Ecstasy. Otherwise this is a museum piece.
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
7/29/2003 10:54:21 PM
Tremendous photo Chris. Aside from the beautiful woman I think your unique viewpoint really makes the shot. Gorgeous.
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| Photo By: Chris Blaszczyk
(K:610)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
7/25/2003 9:25:46 PM
HaHa! How very cute. Terrific capture of the decisive moment.
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| Photo By: Jeroen Wenting
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
7/4/2003 7:53:32 PM
Quite awesome Roy. I like the window very much. Contrasts very well with the rustiness of the hood.
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| Photo By: Rose Hooper
(K:899)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
6/3/2003 7:42:10 AM
The east coast answer to Eric Goldstein and Alisa Mudge. Cool photo Terr but I think she's just a tad too blurry...unless of course the photo were huge....which it isn't in my little laptop.
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| Photo By: Terrence Kent
(K:7023)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
6/3/2003 7:23:42 AM
Good lighting and good pose Andy. Good bokeh too. The face looks a tad darker than the body especially the arms and the tan line has no business being there. Otherwise it's starting to look professional.
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| Photo By: Andy Ly
(K:716)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
6/3/2003 12:25:36 AM
Terrific sidelighting Musabah. Personally I would have wanted to see some of that great light on lower right of the photo as well. Was this dry mudhole bigger? Would a wider lens stopped down worked also?
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| Photo By: Musabah Almarar
(K:866)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
6/2/2003 3:46:12 AM
Great texture shown here, Musabah. I like the lower window and the fact that it's not perfect. Maybe a second photo with crop showing only the lower winder will be effective.
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| Photo By: Musabah Almarar
(K:866)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
6/1/2003 6:26:50 PM
Somebody kiss it and see if it turns into a prince. Nice composition Harvey but I think the top right of the photo is a bit dark.
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| Photo By: Harvey Yau
(K:49)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:58:48 AM
Very cool. If I were to nitpick, I would want to see a sharper image.
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
(K:7511)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:55:30 AM
Hey this is gorgeous even if you couldn't hold the camera steady. Good job Alisa.
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| Photo By: Alisa Mudge
(K:7511)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:50:41 AM
The tension. I love the tension. Nice photo JT even if you sold out and went digi.
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| Photo By: Jeroen Wenting
(K:25317)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:47:23 AM
I think I would appreciate this photo more had it been shot at eye level.
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| Photo By: Chelsea Burke
(K:5750)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:42:53 AM
I'm looking at this photo after several bottles of wine and I can see a message from Elvis. It's saying...."Eric don't give up your day job"......"I'm All Shook Up"....
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:39:22 AM
He's so cute! I heard a rumor that you used crazy glue on his feet to keep in place. I hope it's not true.
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/29/2003 9:35:18 AM
Simply beautiful. Also your crop is perfect. The sunlight on the muted flowers in the back ground takes this photo from a mere snapshot to something more special. Love that bokeh. (Bokeh also means dunce in Japanese!)
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/28/2003 9:16:30 PM
Pose is good, focus is soft. Faces are in the shadows. Also the girl on the left looks twice as large as the one on the right. She probably won't like a photo that shows her like that. Try to pose her behind the slimmer one and shoot from closer up with a wider angle lens. This will even out the proportion. Also if you're closer you can use a reflector to put some light on their faces.
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
(K:233)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/27/2003 7:18:29 PM
Hey great how only the eyes have color. You get the award for cat photo of the week.
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| Photo By: Brad Buskey
(K:419)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 11:06:43 PM
The little guy's unhappy face kinda puts a damper on the whole photo. Added to the fact that you can see the shoulder arm of the person behind the tree holding the tyke up, I would rate this as one of your less successful attempts. Aside from that, the lighting looks OK and the tree just behind the child seems to be in fine focus.
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| Photo By: Kelly Abrams
(K:233)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 7:02:40 PM
Hey great shot. Beautiful lighting although you might consider filling in his right cheek with a reflector.
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| Photo By: David Chang-Sang
(K:680)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 2:46:47 AM
Techinically fine but I find this a bit clinical....then again that roof of the stadium looks a bit like a surgical mask....
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| Photo By: David Chang-Sang
(K:680)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 2:42:29 AM
This could be sold as an ad for a leather goods manufacturer. I see the fundamentals of two nice shoulder bags and a wallet right there.
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| Photo By: Chelsea Burke
(K:5750)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 2:40:29 AM
I think this photo is just TERRIFIC. You should title it Looooong and Narrrrrrow.
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| Photo By: Eric Goldwasser
(K:4294)
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Critique By:
Bill Akata (K:2929)
5/26/2003 2:32:05 AM
Frank's wondering what happened to the pizza he left there.
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| Photo By: Terrence Kent
(K:7023)
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