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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
10/17/2007 1:10:00 AM
Hey Laura! How's it going?
Do you remember me? I'm now living in Australia! Gimme a message back :-)
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Hugo de Wolf (K:185110)
5/15/2006 7:23:58 PM
Hi Laura,
I like the natural looking tones in this one, as well as the feeling of depth you created by chosing this low PoV.
There are a few things that bother me about this photo a bit. If I consider the centered flower to be the primary subject, the one on the right, equally large, creates a bit of unbalance in the composition. Maybe it's the lack of a clearly distringuishable primary subject, too - it leaves the decision in the middle without introducing anything in the composition that clearly attracts (and holds) the viewers attention.
Also, by centering the flower in the middle, most of the effect of depth is reduced, IMO, and the image becomes rather static.
Another thing is the relatively shallow Depth of field. It makes the image (and viewers attention) "wander off" a bit in the top left corner; If you could introduce an out of focus area in the lower right, I think you could compensate for that without loosing the feeling of depth.
This all sounds rather mean and negative, but that's probably my prhasing, I do think there are a few aspects that could be improved upon... Hope you see what I mean.
Cheers,
hugo
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
BISWAJIT DASGUPTA (K:2818)
5/14/2006 8:11:47 PM
Beautiful color pattern,nice composition,great job.
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Critique By:
Baqer M. Jawad (K:500)
5/14/2006 5:43:28 PM
Very nice colors , like it !!
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Critique By:
Sergio Romero Gomez (K:920)
4/13/2006 2:40:29 PM
Hello Laura:
I really like your picture, you take an unusual behavior and it is happening so the picture is dinamic.
Besides that your composition is very good with the focal to the left and a little bellow the center, and the triangular composition with the fish and the two stones colored stones.
Congratulations.
Sergio
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Critique By:
Laura Haffenden (K:58)
4/11/2006 10:45:07 PM
Hi GIrIsH, Thank you for your comment, The original picture was much bigger but unfortunately I could not use it due to the limit, I will however try to format it so I can add the full version as I think you will like that one even more 
Thank you for all your comments
Laura
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Critique By:
lobhesh l (K:678)
4/9/2006 7:06:53 PM
Hi Laura
You captured good colors but sky could have been more say 2/3 to 1/3 ground to give much more dramatic colors and composition.
regards
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Rashed Abdulla (K:163889)
4/2/2006 8:11:04 PM
very great image, wonderful details and very pleasant colors and lighting , all of the best my friend
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Laura Haffenden (K:58)
4/1/2006 9:35:31 AM
Gracias por su comentario agradable
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Laura Haffenden (K:58)
4/1/2006 9:34:12 AM
Thank you, They were very sweet!
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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
4/1/2006 5:10:11 AM
This is nice! Your strongest image yet. I like the diagonal lines below a nice bold composition with the two ducks. Well done and nice choice of crop!!!
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
4/1/2006 5:08:15 AM
Estupenda toma de esta pareja de patos...excelentes detalles
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Critique By:
Epock (K:-107)
3/31/2006 11:49:56 PM
How very pretty! Are they cute or what? ;-)
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Critique By:
Ezequiel Lozada (K:17176)
3/31/2006 11:45:47 PM
Oh God! impress me that face.
bravo
ez
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Critique By:
David Walker (K:1148)
3/31/2006 8:21:40 PM
Strong image. Beautiful shot of that tree. I also like the tone from the wall.
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Critique By:
k o c (saatci) (K:8257)
3/31/2006 7:22:27 PM
Great photograph...
Very nice clear...
Congrats Laura Haffenden!!!
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
3/31/2006 7:14:25 PM
Ahaaa much better Laura!
Did you stroke this fish? I'm not sure i'd dare!
Good catch with the mouth out of the water - i've been doing shots like that myself today at the lake.
Keep 'em coming!
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Critique By:
Ace Star (K:21040)
3/24/2006 7:13:49 PM
good capture! also nice colors and details
excellent
wish you all the best
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
3/24/2006 3:23:14 PM
Very pretty Laura! Love the dark tones and the grain, very sweet portrait!!!
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Alicia Popp (K:87532)
3/24/2006 2:00:21 AM
Precioso retrato, muy expresivo y bonito ese rostro!
Felicitaciones!
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| Photo By: Laura Haffenden
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Critique By:
Mervo (K:8643)
3/22/2006 11:53:20 PM
Super portrait, the angle is great but I do think that the colourwould be better in B+W. Nice work L!!
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