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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
10/20/2006 7:40:44 PM
you have no idea how difficult times I am seeing these days.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
(K:1047)
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
10/20/2006 7:40:36 PM
you have no idea how difficult time I am seeing these days.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
(K:1047)
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
10/20/2006 4:46:41 PM
Hi. I am back. nice photo. I wish it were a little shorper.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
(K:1047)
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
10/18/2006 6:31:53 AM
Thank you shadi for coming by. I will see your portfolio too. Come again.
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| Photo By: A S
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/23/2006 6:24:28 AM
thank you Ian. I still am looking at your portfolio. I ll let you know what I am thinking about your photos too.
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| Photo By: A S
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/23/2006 6:21:47 AM
wow this is great although some parts of it seem overexposed. But I love this shot very much. esp its title. Why don't you see my photos? Come and leave me comments please. Tell me what you think about tem.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/22/2006 1:16:36 AM
I haven't seen that movie. I'll try the B&W and I will post that. Thank you.
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| Photo By: A S
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/21/2006 10:24:51 AM
Thank you Mohsen for seeing my photos and leaving me comments. I think we are all lost in our dreams. The unreachable forbidden dreams. Wishes never become granted so we become as incomplete and lonely as you mentioned as a comment for your photo.
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| Photo By: A S
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/21/2006 10:23:39 AM
It’s great to see somebody who feels and understands what you’re trying to say. Thank you very much for seeing my photos Fabio. You are from AUSTRIA, country of music. I do love your country though I don’t know much about it. I hope we can become friends.
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| Photo By: A S
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/21/2006 10:13:03 AM
I like the colors very much. If I didn’t know the type your camera, I would guess it’s Nikon 
I see your portfolio and I see you look close to things. You see the texture of different things around you. That’s quite amazing and shrewd. You are not trying to see. You are seeing. I will come again and follow your work.
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| Photo By: Fabio Keiner
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/20/2006 11:38:58 AM
I don’t know if I had the right to do this, but I thought since we’re friends and we are all here trying to help each other improve our photography, there was no problem if I worked on this photo and let you know if you had done this on your photo, it would be a better one than the one you have posted.
Frames sometimes give… how can I say that? Frames sometimes give personalities to photos. It’s like suits for men. Some photos without it seem naked.
I worked on the contrast of the photo a little and of course on the saturation too. As you see in both colorful one and the B&W one the clouds seem alive. That’s because of the level of the photos I worked on. In the one I did blue seems bluer and the hot color on the bodies of the soldiers seems hotter, don’t they? And I suppose that’s the best size of the photos for the net according to professional photographers.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/20/2006 9:21:17 AM
The only thing that this picture is not talking about is colors. And it’s because of the bad perspective you chose to take this shot. A shot from above – a vertical one- would have worked for the title.
With a little deeper depth of field you could have expressed the pallet and the colors more. You know these images are better being taken in studios because of the light especially.
The frame is not good either. It needs to be thicker and I would do it in gray.
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| Photo By: Harald Felgentreu
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/20/2006 9:21:08 AM
I don’t get the title, but I like the photo very much. The reality of the scene gets me. The girls seem confident and they are helping each other with the heavy bag. Well, that’s quite a story.
The composition is good. The contrast seems too much. It needs a think frame too. May be in gray.
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| Photo By: Grzegorz Markowski
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/20/2006 9:20:10 AM
I read your profile and know you’re incurably romantic. So am I. You being like what you said in your profile is obvious among your photos.
The manipulated one is better than the original one though I don’t like the manipulated one either. It’s not professionally manipulated. Look at the edges of the flowers and the vase. The leaves seem overexposed too. Are this vase, the flowers and the fairy supposed to tell a story? If so, why don’t I get it?
I saw your portfolio almost completely and I have to say you have better pictures like the lovely Soft Grasses & Flowers, Mystic Journey, Crystal Vision and some more.
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Photo By: Shirley D. Cross-Taylor
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 8:54:56 PM
Come on. Write the commonts and replys in English. I want to know what is going on.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 8:53:14 PM
First of all I want to tell us- the viewers- about the cameras you use. Sony? What’s the lens? What’s the film? Did you scan the photo? Fill out the forms about the photo you shoot. You know why? Because that time we know how much we should expect from you and the photo. Secondly write about the photos you take. Give us information about them. I just know this shot was taken in Spain. But where is it exactly in Barcelona? Why is the title of the photo Soldiers? Is it a symbol?
But about this photo I have to say I wish you didn’t crop the top of the statue (the biggest one) away. And I wish you zoomed back at much as you could. That time the subject would look bigger. Do you know what I mean? The widest form of the lens would work. The right side of the statue is overexposed. I would go left as much as I could so that I could put the sun behind the statue. The statue wood look dark itself and from different parts of it the sun shine would reflect into the lens. Can you try that if you can go there again of course? If yes, tell me to tell you what to do.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 8:42:43 PM
I think the subject is nice. Thank god somebody finally told me you're nice
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 10:12:25 AM
The sticks tend to yellow too. What color are trees?
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| Photo By: Sam Kh
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 10:10:30 AM
I think it's not about you desiring to work on photos you take or not. Sometimes you take a picture and you see it's far away the reallity. The colors and contrast, etc. So you work on it to push it forward to how it was while you were shooting it. Where on Earth the sky is this blue and or the birds are this yellow? working on it makes it look how it was when you were shooting it.
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| Photo By: Sam Kh
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 10:09:34 AM
What? do you think I should change it? I have better ones.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 2:49:47 AM
could a picture be more beautiful than this one? I wish you worked on the level of the photo alittle bit more.
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| Photo By: Mark Peterson
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/19/2006 2:48:12 AM
the subject is in the center, in which I suppose you know, doing it is not really professional. It tends to yellow. I wish it were at least sepia. Ther level and the contrast need more attention in photos taken by digital cameras.it needs a frame too. you have better photos. this looks like a step backward.
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| Photo By: nasima salehi
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 8:13:22 PM
Yes but you have to click on it to see it better.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 12:51:33 PM
if the photo was a little bit more sharpened and you could remve the shadow of that human being floting in the water, this could be a perfect one although I still like it very much.
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| Photo By: Ali Peyman
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 12:46:57 PM
good contrast. good story.
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| Photo By: Ali Peyman
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 12:42:51 PM
Thank you for your kind comment on my photo. I some of your photos. There are photos that I like among them like this very one called Yellow though I think it’s too much saturated. I think you could do better with D70. Maybe you have to work on your photos more in Photoshop. Like working on the level, THE CONTRAST and of course the colors. What’s your lens?
Stay in touch.
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| Photo By: Sam Kh
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 12:42:21 PM
I didn’t know you photographed by a phone camera. Yeah. I think you’d better buy a camera.
And about this photo I have to say the title is good. And the photo reminds me of Pink Floyd (Run Like Hell).
I would sharpen the photo a little bit more. And the hands (the white ones) more seeable by working on the contrast or replacing their colors with blue or something. It needs a frame too I suppose. Did you use four “different” pictures for the running part?
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| Photo By: Sarah Zand Vakili
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 12:38:36 PM
scanning lowers the quality of the photos. I strongly suggest you to buy a digital camera. You are going to have to spend some money if you want to go on photographying. I can help you find a good one. I know a lot of sites. You can research first then buy.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 9:05:20 AM
Creative shot. Good composition.. There are too many items around the subject (your feet) which are distracting. Putting the aperture on 7.1 or 8 with the same shutter speed would have helped the dress to be focused as well as the feet and the hat. I saw Gnork too. That’s a better shot comparing to the other two. Hope to see more, Susanna.
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| Photo By: susanna venisti
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Critique By:
A S (K:633)
9/18/2006 8:09:46 AM
Nice title.
You made a good decision you didn’t touch the grain. But what I don’t like about the photo is her hand cropped. You should have told her to take her hand off the face or otherwise to keep it close to her chin. I don’t get the duty of the hand the way it is. To tell you the truth I have done the same thing in one of my photos too. I love the photo, but every time I see it, I don’t know what the hand is doing there!
Also if you had told her to keep her head up little bit more, the shadows around her eyes wouldn’t have existed.
Everything else about the photo is perfect, the tone, the contrast, the background and the model of course is pretty enough to capture anyone’s attention.
Thank you for sharing your experiences with us.
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