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Matej Maceas
{K:24381} 5/19/2003
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What I like about the composition is the positioning of the boat in the image. The horizon (meaning the water horizon, not the hills horizon) is above the centre of the image, I like that. I believe that it could be even higher still; but more importantly, the horizon is tilted to the right - dead horizontal would be better.
As a suggestion, not criticism, perhaps it would be interesting to find an angle where the reflection of the walkway would exit the picture at the bottom edge of the photo, rather than in the corner.
The exposure is very good on the boat and the woodwork. However, as Derek mentioned, the sky is way too bright in the top right corner, and the strong cyan in the top left looks a bit unnatural (if that is the way it was, never mind). A possible solution to this would be to crop off some of the sky (just below the cyan part; that would move the horizon up, too). I don't mind the transmission tower too much.
I you are a perfectionist, you may wish to crop off just a very tiny slice off the left - there is a dark something sticking into the image just underneath the walkway.
Post a pic of your bike someday :-)
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LIM CH
{K:1605} 5/17/2003
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nice shot. regards
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Ronny Van Eeckhoutte
{K:12734} 5/17/2003
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Good shot, well composed with nice pleasing colours.
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Derek Kennedy
{K:2270} 5/17/2003
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That transmission line really distracts..the upper right corner too washed out, and it seems the horizon line is tilted
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G C
{K:12204} 5/17/2003
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Very pretty shot, well composed, great colours!
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Stuart Boyle
{K:1505} 5/17/2003
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Nice work and great comp and colors
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Hayri CALISKAN
{K:16195} 5/17/2003
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Fantastic composition.
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Craig Pickles
{K:162} 5/17/2003
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I like the colors and the scene. Like the vertical too, whcih is nice. For a downer, the tranmission tower on the hill is out of place, but more important, the blotch of whiteness in the upper right is too much. Too bright. Draws your eyes to it, instead of the boat.
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Alberto Agnoletti
{K:12811} 5/17/2003
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Very nice shot!!
Bye Alberto
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luisa vassallo
{K:28230} 5/17/2003
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bellissima!!
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